not hot. Definatly warm.
Well, you don't quite have the voice of a rapper. I wouldn't worry to much about that though, because you can go for your own thing. it just means that the frist few times hereing you rap isn't going to be natural.
also, I don't like the song ends. a bit sudden.
but other then that I like your rymes and your kind of "fuck you" mentality (I just hope you rap about more intresting subjects in the future)